this is hateful. gay faggots? really?

Not enough story

This is basically just a looping fight. Needs a punchline or some plot; anything.

it seems like he doesnt jump high enough. i can never get the little energy things. also, where are the controls at?

112. damn. in first grade i scored 149. I've been an artist for far too long I suppose :/

It was lacking in appeal.

The dialogue is decent, but the monotonous gameplay left me with no desire to continue playing.

No formal critique here; I can't even; this piece is just too much bitchin. I absolutely love it.

Again, your color usage and compositional skills are this piece's prime assets. However, her foot is not anatomically correct at all--a glaring fault compared to how spot on the rest of her body is--and I feel like the exaggeration of the demon's stride was a slight bit overdone. That 's what my eye sees.

Compositionally, you have something very nice. Your color use is obviously deliberate and it strengthens your piece. My only negative critique is your use of scratch texture; on the focal figure's hair you nailed it spot on, but I feel like on the other figures it creates distracting levels of contrast in the details. I did like the placement of the birds, but finally, I feel like the sternum is set too low on the rib cage relative to your figure's chest line.
---overall a very nice piece